Butterfly on Hemp-agrimony

[Grabarz]

This is my first photograph on BD.






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Camera Model: Kodak Z712
Lens: 61mm
Shutter speed: 1/200 sec.
Apture: F4,4
ISO: 64

[CougarX]

Pitty that you had so much bright light when you took the photo.

The butterfly is really sharp

Tip on compo : next time try to make a photo just with the flower in the middle and the butterfly.

Cheers

Dirk

[Irineas]

Oorspronkelijk geplaatst door CougarX

Pitty that you had so much bright light when you took the photo.
The butterfly is really sharp
Tip on compo : next time try to make a photo just with the flower in the middle and the butterfly.

Dirk

Hi Grabarz and Dirk

Welcome Grabarz to the land of little and this critical forum.
Sorry Dirk, I do not entiraly disagree with this compo.
But that's a personal matter of taste !.
I like the less stiff centered fotography with its place in nature.
These flowers would be awesome when they where as the one foreground flower is, in soft gentle collertones.
It is the background flower behind the butterfly that disturbes me more. That is a matter of position and to see more than just youre model.
If taken in a bit different position, and offcourse no burnd out flowers by too much licht, just a bit more to the right, it would be a very pretty picture.
There is no law that states that you have to take a picture of a butterfly always straight towards its side !
Possible Grabarz can turn the licht a bit down in his photoshop programme, maybe it will improve the picture.
just try it and repost it here ?.
Now what is good on this picture is that it is sharp, the model is not stiff centered. So you have an eye for it.
Keep up the good work and spirit, and sorry for the poor English.

Beye for now, Groeten maar weer

[Grabarz]

Thanks for the advice, Dirk & Irineas! I really appreciate it.
Next time I'll try to use your advice when I take a photograph.


I tried to turn the light a little bit down in PS. Is it better?